Tuesday, September 27, 2011

The Stolen Ring

For Composition and Spelling, I wrote a paragraph about a stolen ring on a thick chain.  I used nine of my spelling words when I only needed to use five.  I forgot to underline the word something.  That's also one of my spelling words this week.  I did my best handwriting work.  It took me 25 minutes but I worked very hard on it.  Dad said it was my best handwriting work ever.

1 comment:

Dad said...

Jonathan this is outstanding work, both in quality of writing and in sentence construction. Notice how many spelling words you were able to squeeze into those sentences when you stopped to think about how to describe things well? Describing things well is part of being a good communicator, I'm glad to see you're on your way.